Written for the Friday Fictioneers led by Rochelle A 100 word (or so) story based on this photo prompt.
Pure and simple. Some things actually matter. Especially that you tried to kill yourself. Especially that you survived.
Sissy looked out the window. It was late spring. The fjord had melted. The ferry had docked. Children had stopped singing “Frozen” and had started singing “In Summer”. She laid out her dental instruments. She’d be getting busy.
And one day, soon, Buck would step off that ferry. He’d written her so just yesterday. “I love you, sweetie. I feel lucky. Kisses on your cheek and everywhere, Buck.”
He’d always been such a dreamer.
Ellespeth
**PHOTO PROMPT Copyright-Ted Strutz**
And I’ll see if I can’t do something with this. Link it up to last week’s Buck story – here: https://balconyviewz.wordpress.com/2014/06/04/ink-blots-prose/ and see if I can’t add to this now and then. Here is this week’s – seems to stand alone okay, too:
Dear Ellespeth,
A pleasant piece that speaks of courage and hope.
Nice.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hi Rochelle ~
Thanks for reading and for your comment! I hope you’ll have a restful time with your family
Ellespeth
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I feel like his dream is soon to become a nightmare.
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I can see another wave coming crushing down.. hope that the optimism prevails though..
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We’ll see about that 🙂 Hope your travels and visits were happy for all.
Ellespeth
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What a warm story, with just the right amount of coldness in it.
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked this piece. I appreciate your visit and your comment.
Ellespeth
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A little up, a little down. A bit of depression, mixed with a bunch of hope! Well done. 🙂
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Thank you! Never hurts to have some hope floating around…I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for passing by and for your comment,
Ellespeth
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Ah, a very nice one. “Kisses on your cheek and everywhere,” that does bring back some early memories of one I loved.
Thanks for the smile.
Scott
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Hi Scott ~
Always happy to bring a smile. Happy you’ve enjoyed this…Thanks for passing by and reading my work.
Ellespeth
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I will try to stop back by.
Scott
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Love the move from “Frozen” to “Summer-(time & the living is easy”, perhaps? 🙂
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While toddler sitting this morning, I finally got to see the movie “Frozen”. And then I came, later, to WordPress, and saw this fjord photo. Somehow I fit this into a previous piece of Buck prose.
Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it.
Ellespeth
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