Another installment of Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle. 100 words or so based on the image below.
So here’s some more of that Sissy and Buck thang 😉
Sissy and her Aunt Tina were lunching at the Napoleon House Bar. The New Orleans humidity and heat were creating a steamy atmosphere, and early afternoon was dying for a cooling rain.
“So I’m leaving tomorrow for the Norway farm.” Sissy took a sip of her Brandy Alexander. “These are just the best!”
“I suppose they would be at 1PM on a Tuesday.” Tina rolled her eyes. “Isn’t Buck getting discharged next week from – you know…”
“The crazy house? Yes. Next Wednesday.”
“Oh Sissy!” Tina did another eye thing. “I didn’t know Buck farmed.”
“He doesn’t.”
Ellespeth
We visited New Orleans a couple years before Katrina. Enjoyed the cool rains in the afternoon, but hated the stifling humidity afterward. You did a great job with the dialogue and “eye things” I could just see these two southern gals.
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Hi Russell 🙂 I don’t know how I’ve managed to miss some of these comments.
Oh yes! The sauna after the rain. I lived there 50 years and remember that soooo clearly. Of course, now that I’m living in California I miss that sauna feeling. I’m glad you liked this piece…
Ellespeth
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Hello, Ellespeth! It’s been too long since I’ve visited your blog. What a funny story this was 🙂 I love the eye rolls and the simple but effective way Sissy makes it known that she will be leaving without Buck. And you have other Sissy and Buck stories? I must explore … 😉
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Ellespeth, Good description of a conversation and atmosphere. It looks like Sissy isn’t going to be around for Buck’s release. I can see the conversation. Well written as usual. 🙂 —Susan
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Such great creation of atmosphere.. the snappy dialogue and the description so much to the point.. very nice
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Thanks, Bjorn! Conversations get lively, down South, after a few Brandy Alexanders…glad you enjoyed this. I just saw your comment 😦
Ellespeth
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Hi Ellespeth, I love your writing. So many fun lines in this and I’d love to visit New Orleans one day. LHN
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I think my favorite line is, “Tina did another eye thing.” Reminds me of how children do “eye things” for all sorts of reasons.
janet
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Thanks! I’m chuckling over kids doing the eye thing! They’re best at it…
Ellespeth
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I like the idea of “afternoon… dying for a cooling rain”. My office is a bit like that at the moment, though rain inside would be bad 🙂
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I’m glad I don’t experience that kind of heat any longer. Hopefully your week end will be cooler…thanks for reading, doc, and for your comment.
Ellespeth
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Hi Ellespeth, New Orleans is a place in my list to visit! I like your description of the place, I could few the humidity here.
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I lived there 50 years and – oh boy – now that I live in California, I miss the rain and the humidity and, of course. the Brandy Alexaders 🙂 I hope you will visit one day!
Ellespeth
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