Time for this week’s Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers. It begins anew each Wednesday. 100-150 words more or less to do with the photo below (photo changes each week). I’ll put the link to this week’s stories at the end of this piece. Blogs, like this, are such a great gift for writers – and I believe readers, too. Pass on by – click on the froggy at the end of this story.
And so…all that would come to me is this poem. Nothing new about these feelings. Not in poetry and not in fiction.
Even though the snow has melted
and spring beckons hopeful thoughts,
there seems still the chill
of winter passing through our love.
I sit
near the fireplace
on a soft floor pillow
and poke
burning logs into a crackling state
and watch
you, sitting in your easy chair,
reading a book
of fiction.
Outside there is a crispness in the air.
The sky is bluer than a blues song.
Some trees struggle to survive another winter.
Some trees
refuse to accept
that winter exists.
One day
the wind will call us
and we will sail onward.
Eventually we might dock
where nothing else matters but love.
None of this means anything.
Today is just a day
stuck between seasons.
Ellespeth
photo prompt © Dawn M. Miller
A lovely poem, Ellespeth. You have captured the end of winter and and the beckoning ‘hopeful thoughts of spring’ quite beautifully. I love the image you create in the second verse. 🙂
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That second verse was challenging but, in the end, I like the way it’s laid out. Thanks for continuing to read my work Millie.
Ellespeth
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You are very welcome. I enjoy reading it.
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Very nicely written Ellespeth. I like how you have both seasons in it. I can feel the warmth from the inside and the chill from the outside. Stuck between seasons gives it a nice touch.
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I’m glad this piece worked, Jessie. Can’t believe I’m just getting around to last week’s comments and have already viewed this week’s photograph. Where does time go?
Ellespeth
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This is wonderful Ellespeth!
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Thanks, PJ!
By the way, our hummingbirds have returned. We had to put the old feeder back out 😛 Picky lil birdies, but I’m happy to be able to watch them again.
Ellespeth
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Oh that’s great! I am watching them too. They are so cute. I love watching them. We had a real hard rain mixed with hail about a week ago and it killed one of the birds. It made me so sad.
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oh noooo 😦 That’s so sad, PJ.
I just looked at this week’s photograph. What a great one!
Ellespeth
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I’m glad you liked it. I wasn’t sure whether I should use it or not because of the controversy and different faiths in WordPress but I’m getting low on prompt photos.
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Oh it’s a great photograph! If anyone finds it controversial, they can write a controversial story 😛
I can send a couple of photographs it you’d like.
Ellespeth
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That would be lovely. You can send them to me at mepricelessjoy@gmail.com.
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This is beautiful 😍 and it fits perfectly with the photo prompt.
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Thanks for reading this, Ameena. I was really at a loss with this photo.
I love that little smiley face! How did you do that?
Ellespeth
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Haha, it’s an automatic android smiley. I use an Xperia phone, and hence get these cool smileys. 😄😄
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