Here’s a sonnet I’m submitting for Literary Lion’s word of the week. The word is ‘eye‘. Please do click the link for other entries.
(Since I’m just finishing up a biography of Edna St. Vincent Millay, I thought I’d share another sonnet I’ve written. I’m also coloring in an owl coloring book for adults. So…lucky you 😛 )
Three owls in a tree one evening last Spring
cooing, to the Jasmine flapping, their wings
all a flutter with scents and sensing love.
My little mask eyed one lifts me above!
All efforts effortless this starry May
become against the sapphire night’s skyway.
One owl, seemingly wiser than the rest
took a moment – perched on the branch – to rest
and catch her breath. She looked beyond that night
while far away a full moon shining bright
spoke to her; its words echoed majestic
all that was possible – all fantastic.
Three owls roosting in a bare tree that night
were seen embracing
just before their flight.
Ellespeth
I loved the sonnet.
But that image stole all my attention. MY GOD so cute!!
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I know! I could not believe I’d found the most perfect photo for this sonnet. My coloring book page – the one that inspired this sonnet – is fairly awfully colored I’m afraid.
Glad you liked the sonnet…I’m still working on it, of course.
Ellespeth
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Beautiful Ellespeth!
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Thank you, PJ. I’m feeling better – healthier – today. I want to pass by to see this week’s photograph. I hope I will be able to participate.
Ellespeth
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I didn’t know you were ill Ellespeth. I’m so sorry to hear that. Take it easy and don’t overdo it until you are completely recovered, ok?
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I don’t talk about it much, here, but….I have a depression and some other issues. Sometimes it all gets the best of me. Mostly, I’m better in a few days. I have prepared enough meals and frozen them up for 2 weeks. That is a relief to know and to have announced to my husband…Thank you for your kind thoughts, PJ
Ellespeth
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I really do hope you start feeling better! I understand about depression. Get well!
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I can’t wait to see this week’s photo! I’m limiting my wordpress time and your FFFAW one is a keeper! And this one, Literary Lion – though I fall behind here with my reading.
Laterz!
Ellespeth
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I’m so happy to hear that Ellespeth!! 🙂
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I’ll be sending it out in a couple of hours.
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What a lovely sonnet, it has such a classic and timeless quality to it.
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Thanks, Laura! I haven’t been feeling well this summer…I’m on my way to read postings of these past few weeks. I’ve felt badly to post and not be able to read 😦 I do love your word challenge so…I just hate to post without commenting on pieces I read and I don’t like to just click like 😛
Ellespeth
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Oh gosh I wouldn’t worry about reading everything if you’re ill, it does take such a lot of time to do so! I hope you feel better soon 🙂
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Great job on the sonnet and really cute owls. 😃
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Aren’t those the cutest owls, Jessie? I couldn’t believe I found this perfect photo to go with my sonnet.
You’re probably on your weekly job travels. Stay safe!
Ellespeth
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Hi Ellespeth, I see you are busy, Love the sonnet, owls are so cute and smart bird. Love the ‘sapphire night’s skyway’ !
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I’m coloring a little each day and writing a bit. Glad you liked the sonnet and that particular passage – just as the sky looked that evening.
Hoping all is well and that you are enjoying your last few weeks of Canadian warmth. I once spent a very long winter – just outside Toronto . If I remember correctly, that winter lasted until almost May!
Ellespeth
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Hi Ellespeth, from October to May it’s freezing here, long winter. Have a great nigh!
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Love the excerpt and the pic
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Oh thanks! I wrote the sonnet.. glad you liked it.
Elespeth
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