That Watershed Moment – A Love Poem

Poetry for a fiction challenge?  Oh well…it’s what came to me when I saw this photo.  I hope you will enjoy…

Here is my submission for this week’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers.  Thanks to PJ for hosting this weekly challenge.  Click the lil froggy for more stories.

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Sonya with the blog, Only 100 Words.

water towers

That Watershed Moment

On the way
to our bedroom you pass by
and kiss me
with that
come to bed when you can kiss.
Your skin is warm
against my cheek
and your blue eyes sparkle
in the low evening lighting
golden.
Before I can touch
your face
you are gone
and all the space
you filled
is empty and still.

Ellespeth

 

14 thoughts on “That Watershed Moment – A Love Poem

  1. Beautifully done, Ellespeth. 🙂 The emptiness of the ending gives a real sense of foreboding, especially with the ephemeral nature of his presence, making the poem a sweet glimpse of a loving relationship whilst also creating a sense of loss and pain.

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