Time again for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. So grateful to PJ for hosting this weekly challenge. This week’s photo prompt is provided by Yinglan. Thank you Yinglan!
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Here is the photograph and my part fiction/part memoir story:
The Eccentricities Of Romance
Nobody in my family ever really knew Ivy. One day out of no where Dad, a widower for seven years, announced he was going to marry some woman he’d met on the internet. That just didn’t sit well with us. The internet part. The sudden part.
Nobody in my family ever really knew Ivy. And then one day, decades later, Dad had died and Ivy had reached a critical point in her ability to care for herself. We moved her into a care facility.
“I’ve always wondered what attracted you to Dad,” I said during one of our last visits.
“Those model airplanes he had hanging from the ceiling of his library. Remember those?” Ivy squeezed my hand. “I just thought that was the most romantic thing I’d ever seen.”
I shook my head and smiled. They had always been such an odd pair. The engineer and the poet. “You two.”
“I know,” she agreed. Her smile lit the space between us.
Nobody in my family ever really knew Ivy, and that was the shame of it all.
Ellespeth
What a beautiful story. I love how the circle is completed.
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Ellespeth that is a beautiful story although sad. I think that at first they didn’t really want to know Ivy but at the end regretted that they didn’t. Just lovely and true to many lives also.
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You said so much in this short sad story,
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Beautiful and unique take on the prompt. Well done
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Thanks!
Ellespeth
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Ahhh, what a sweet, touching story! That is true, they didn’t take the time to get to know her because of their ire on their dad getting married so suddenly.
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You’d think 7 years a widower wouldn’t make his remarriage sudden, right? Oh well…
I’m happy you liked this one, PJ.
Ellespeth
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A poignant piece indeed.
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Thanks, Keith!
Ellespeth
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Nicely done, a bittersweet look at romance.
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Thanks, Iain.
Ellespeth
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I like the repetition of that sentence, it works really well. Lovely story!
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Oh thanks! I worry about stuff like that.
Glad you liked it.
Ellespeth
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Everlasting romance – what touches us in the internal world, and is fast disappearing from the outer world.
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Seems that way sometimes, doesn’t it?
Ellespeth
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Beautiful and utterly touching story.
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Thank you.
Ellespeth
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