Time again for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. So grateful to PJ for hosting this weekly challenge. Please follow little froggy for more stories.
Here is this week’s photograph and my story:
After a lifetime of problematic decisions, I sat here at his bedside. My one perfect choice.
We held hands and gazed at each other. Sometimes he smiled at me.
“What are you smiling about?” I asked.
“You always say you like the way my face brightens up when I smile,” he replied.
“I didn’t mean you have to smile when you’re dying.”
“It doesn’t hurt,” he assured me later. So him. Wondering how to soothe me.
And we spoke back and forth this way until he passed to the other side. I wanted to run after him. I watched him cross over.
Ellespeth
This week’s photo prompt is provided by Joy Pixley. Thank you Joy!
Devastatingly beautiful.
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Thank you john. I’m just seeing your comment.
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and my heart melted with the care he gave her even as he hurt. priceless story!
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I’m not sure – so I imagine that…speaking for myself, and if I could…I’d want to reassure those I was leaving behind.
Ellespeth
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Very nice take on the bridge.
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Thank you, Russell.
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Absolutely beautiful. Hopefully one day they will meet again on the other side
My story is called The Stranger
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Thanks! I’ll try to get over to your blog this evening, but definitely in the morning.
Ellespeth
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A wonderful heartfelt story . 😊
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Thanks, J 🙂
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One perfect choice in a lifetime of problematic decisions — that really hit me. How it can come down to that, and being sure, finally, that this is the right thing. Sad story, but heartening, too. Love is strong that way.
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I can see me there. Probably not as calmly, though. I’m rather dramatic.
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I think I’d have a hard time being calm in that situation too.
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Loved yourunique take…crossing the bridge between life and death becomes easier when you have a nice loving person by your side!
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Thanks! I wanted to do some fairytale thing and this is what my fingers created.
Ellespeth
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Very sweet, heart touching story! It is beautiful with a touch of sad. Great story, Ellespeth!
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Thanks, PJ! I’ll be back on, later, to read the stories. This was such a great photo.
Ellespeth
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I’m so glad to hear you liked the photo!
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So beautiful. The ultimate bridge to cross. Love your take on the prompt.
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That bridge awaiting us all, eh? This is the hopeful view of that bridge…
Thanks for reading this piece and for your comment.
Ellespeth
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Great take on the prompt, and you left me wanting to know more
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Ah! Moving backwards in time.
That can be so painful to do – at times.
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Beautiful story.
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Thanks, Charles.
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Sweet, touching and a little sad.
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Soppy. Sometimes I just get soppy…I don’t live that way but my imagination does…at times.
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A nice way to go, if there is such a thing. Touching moment, well written.
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Thanks, Iain…I guess there isn’t a nice way to go…just an imagined way we hope for.
Ellespeth
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That sort of bridge huh, we all have to cross over someday 🙂 love the story.
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Aren’t we supposed to float over wearing golden wings and white silky gowns? 😛
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Oh I sure hope I do 😂
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